Sunday, 13 May 2012

Packaging Rationale Booklet















































Peer Comments:

Roman Radoczy: http://romanradoczy.blogspot.com.au/2012/05/package.html

Doug Cusack: http://dougcusack-ides1031.blogspot.com.au/2012/05/project-2-packaging.html?showComment=1337044197054#c4900185694076798205

Tom Loefler: http://tomloefler.posterous.com/

Kevin Peng: http://kevinpeng3373311.blogspot.com.au/2012/05/blog-post.html?showComment=1337044887227#c7293225963466541957

Felicia Levina: http://feliciaides1122.blogspot.com.au/2012/05/social-packaging.html











6 comments:

  1. The layout of your page is very neat. It shows enough information without clustering up the page. Your final design looks easy to use.One thing you could have done is to soften the edges of the top to make it more user friendly.

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  2. Well researched Richard! it seems that its quite easy to understand the function of the product by just observing it. The top bit has to be flat for sealing but im not sure whether the the user is feeling comfortable or not when the user is pulling out the syringe. It could have been in another form?

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  3. Good research richard. i like how the syringe covers the needle to keep everyone safe form it especially children. the size can help people identify where the syringe is, but it is a bit too big to be put in a pocket or portability wise.

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  4. Hi richard!! your rationale booklet was very clean and very professional.
    one improvement you could have made though is perhaps have a stand or group package for them?

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  5. Nice work on the rationale booklet. I see that the block-like shape at the top of the syringe-sheath is worth to note because it will prevent it from rolling if the sheath was accidentally dropped on the floor for example.
    But the design can be made more friendlhy to arthritis user. Because the design form looks narrow and I think an arthritis user may have some difficulties holding the sheath with experience of joint-pain.
    Perhaps you could add a ring to the design, so that arthritis user can just hook onto the ring with their finger.

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  6. Great design. I think it is well considered and well prototyped with the model looking very believable. Maybe look at playing with different forms that might compliment your concept further. But overall, Well done.

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